Saturday, June 18, 2005

Completed by .:A:.


...he holds me
.........spins me
..............around

faster,faster,faster!

...turning all
.......known into
.............a blur

never let me go.

... And
...... The blur
......... Passes you by

hold me


... As
...... He holds you
......... And spins you

tight



.:A:. left the verse on the comments page of the earlier post, which completes it in a way i had wanted to but could not. hence am posting it again, completed, thanks .:A:.

30 comments:

. : A : . said...

My pleasure!

:-)

gulnaz said...

.:A:. ;)

jac said...

So he spins two ???

gulnaz said...

jacno, he doesnt spin two but it take to, to spin, right. :)
anyway thanks for coming by. :)

Sk8RN said...

Beautiful.

mermaid said...

Just like A:)

small squirrel said...

wow... lovely
nice work you two!

Misreflection said...

gs, sorry been caught up in life struggles, nice one, just hold on will you, incase his grip slackens;)
Theres nothing better if the forces on both sides are the same ie the one who holds and the one holding on ...

Lorena said...

well its great. as he holds you, the blur fades and everything becomes clear again.

love the other photograph :)

Jamie Dawn said...

Courtney and I are currently in Seoul, Korea. I wanted to say hello and I will try and post some pictures after we get back into our hotel later tonight.
Until then... Hope all is well.

Neel said...

Very cool, that you have collaberated on this. Great work, to both of you!

M said...

Nice pictures..the spread of the colours reminds me of watercolours we used to play with at school...:)

Carrie said...

I love it! The RE-POST part 2...good on you.

gulnaz said...

Sk8RN, glad you find it beautiful, thanks!!

mermaid, :)))

small squirrel, thanks for appreciating it so. :)

Missy, ah darling, excellent advice, will remember when am in such a situation. these words are wishes for most part, so i am not in that 'place' you are thinking me to be, sadly.

Lorena, thanks Lo, glad you liked it! i think both of us have got the same romantic idea about love. here is wishing that we find the 'right' guys. :)

Jamie, that's incredibly sweet of you!! Looking forward to see the pix and say hi to Courtney too! :)

Neel, thanks! :) is it a coincidence that the shirt you are wearing in this pic is blue just as your name, perhaps you like the colour blue best....well just felt like commenting on that. blue is a good colour. :)

M, thanks, i like them too, i had not realised they would turn out like that, the camera shutterspeed was too slow i guess but then i got this abstract kind of watercolour which is better than the real thing. better than the real thing is a song by u2. hey there is a pic by Lorena on her page, its of two vacant deck chairs on the beach, it looks like a water colour painting, its beautiful, please see it, you will love it!!

Mitzee, yeah the re-post, that is a good title too, lol. thanks mitz, read about you being the local celeb on your blog, you better work on your signature now. ;)

Potted-flower said...

Who is he spinning again? theres a lot of spinning - love it though...

DeeM said...

That's so sweet. Nice work you two! :)

Pecos Blue said...

Thank you for your support. I like this and the picture fits along very nicely.

Manjusha said...

You both have a wonderful way with words. Nice!

bablu said...

Holds - spins - around - faster -blur - Looks like bowling a google to me.

NicoleBraganza said...

That is truly beautiful.

transience said...

i adore the collaboration, you guys. good job!

Anil said...

what a nice pic...it perfectly complements the words...and nice collaboration...hope you get to do this again...when creative minds come together the results are always interesting!

jonny ragel said...

anything that reminds me of the storms of jupiter is aces with me.

Hirdu said...

together

....As

.....We whirl

......he smiles

.......and I am....

LOST forever.....

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Pallavi said...

:) hahah nice one

Vasu the terrible said...

:) (smiles)

vasu

gulnaz said...

Potted-Flower yes there is lot of spinning here. :)

Deem, Manjusha, thanks!! :) hope to see you around more often here.

Pecos Blue, thanks, glad you think so too.

bablu, so i know something about cricket, yeaah! :)

Nicky, trans, Anil thank you!! :) am so glad you guys liked it too.

jon, storms of jupiter...!!! :):) love your comments!! :)

Hirdu, thank you for adding your lines too. :)

Pallavi, Vasu, thanks! ;)

ruby said...

Beautifully completed by .:A:. and a pleasure to see two very different people comeing together to complete this piece.
As for romance ...i think you have to be in love with love itself and then you wil find romance all around you, the journey should be romance itself and be a never ending one.

gulnaz said...

rubyq, thanks! it was sweet of A to complete it so. yes, there is romance and poetry in the most unlikliest of places.