Wednesday, January 17, 2007

the spent millions

a million seconds are gone

bring your hand to my heart
breathe breathe

"goodbye"
all the time is gone.

just a million seconds of you.

18 comments:

Amalendu said...

such a rapid yet eloquent transition...

Pat Paulk said...

All in 11.58 days. I had to calculate it out. Very poignant!!

gulnaz said...

amalendu- and such is life... :)

pat paulk- thank you!! :)

Anonymous said...

Very much enjoyed my time spent strolling through your site...as a poet and an avid reader, I found it both enlightening and enriching. I thank you...

Anonymous said...

so very complete:
It takes u just a few
words to capture time

anon

Cecilia said...

Thank you for your New Year's greeting. I wish you a great 2007, too.

gulnaz said...

with hammer and tong...the lettershaper- why thank you so much! i enjoyed my hopover to your blog as well. hope you come by again. :)

anon- ah!!! *big big biggggggg smile* thank you so much! its such a thrill to be appreciated so! ;)

Cecilia- thanks!! :)

Anonymous said...

Spent millions, but still spent on someone, you.

gulnaz said...

mermaid- oh you are such a sweetheart!! :))

Anonymous said...

life is short! :) live it up!
wonderful pithy lovely!

GeL said...

Time, more precious than "millions."
It hurts to read this. It feels like a part of you has also vanished. I ache reading "bring your hand to my heart/breathe breathe"
Your gentle writing always grabs the tender insides of me in a vice.

iamnasra said...

Rapid though
in reflection of seconds
Then the touch of hand
Silent comunication

Loved it

Sorry Im too I have been scattered to..I hope all is well

Pecos Blue said...

Good to hear from you. I will check out your music as well. Happy new year!

Pecos

gulnaz said...

magiceye- thank you!! ;)

gel- and its such a warm feeling to be read and understood so well, thank you so much!!
i can't say how much it means to me to be able to touch another person's heart with my words.

nasra- hey its ok, life is like that sometimes! so glad you enjoyed it!!

pecos- thanks and happy new year to you too!!

Anonymous said...

It's kind of aching and sad but lovely. I think "million" is a pretty word!

gulnaz said...

[a]- thank you so! million becomes prettier in green don't you think. hehehe :)

Cocaine Jesus said...

if this is a wildflower in a meadow then i wish you would lead me there. i feel as if i am in a desert at the moment. this is quite lovely. forlorn but lovely.

gulnaz said...

CJ- forlorn but lovely that is exactly how it felt...
....thank you!