Friday, December 12, 2008

river

breath unto breath
dissolved;
but a disconnect now
a severance, yet not quite.

9 comments:

Amalendu said...

This is nice, a new incarnation....

gulnaz said...

thanks, so glad you liked it!

mermaid said...

Separation from the ocean can be painful, lonely. I hope you find your way back.

Devika said...

....yet not quiet!?

was just relating the words with myself..:)

Nice one...join the stream fast, Gulnaz :)

wishes,
devika

gel said...

so moving and sad
or maybe a new independence?

{illyria} said...

to me, it reads like a journey of moving forward, a continuing farewell to a past, and an approaching close of a chapter.

gulnaz said...

mermaid- trust a mermaid to say that, to know that. ;)

Devika- glad you could relate to them. :) thanks!

Gel- yes sometimes moving on is sad but inevitable.

illyria- for me the metaphor for life is the river and even though it is hard to let go of the past...we try nevertheless...and maybe with passage of time, the hold weakens.

Pallavi said...

How can one disconnect with breath.. impossible.. :)

Nice to see you writing again.
by the way you need to update my blog link :) he he

gulnaz said...

pallavi - happy to reconnect with you :) i'll fix the link.