Friday, September 04, 2009

10 pm

full moon in a rosy haze
i walk beneath
--leaves stirring sleep


Devika said...

Sleep walking??
Trust me Gulnaz, -- I did that in my childhood once or twice :)

no, i get the play here Gulanz....nice one :)


gulnaz said...

Thank you Devika my friend ;)

Magyar said...

of this haze
a mist clouds my dream
morning bird

gulnaz said...

Magyar- thank you :)

C.J.Duffy said...

Beautifully dream like with a rich sequence of imagery. I also like the Haiku feel. It is Haiku isn't it?

gulnaz said...

thanks CJ, its a haiku as far as i know... i don't follow the syllable rule.. i go for the one where you use contrasting images to make a point with a third one as crisply as possible. :)

Janice Thomson said...

Beautiful image Gulnaz. Love that last line.