Sunday, September 09, 2007

always true

do you remember the uncounted little notes i wrote? look for them in places you have forgotten. tear-stained, crumpled or neatly folded with multiple folds, each crease a nervous tension. the billowing mist from the mountains redirect my thoughts to you but never mind these askew dispatches...it is just the sun showers and you.

32 comments:

annie said...

Wow..whatgrandiloquence!!

cocaine jesus said...

touching. soulful. elegant.

hiya. sorry to have been absent so long.
x

Pat Paulk said...

Gulnaz, you've plucked the heart strings here with a wonderful melody!!!

Ashu said...

Stuck my heart s chords with beautiful prose. Elegant!!!

Janice Thomson said...

Oh this is very touching Gulnaz...your words really get to the core of things...excellent.

Anonymous said...

sweet and sensational

Nasra

Alien said...

Such notes found are often a source of unbridled joy and often one of depressing grief... even joyful memories associated with such notes bring sadness as nostalgia hits back..

very nicely written...

mermaid said...

Keep sending those notes, to him and to yourself. You never know what you will get in response.

Alok said...

u keep coming up with these gems tht touch the deep corners of the heart and mind of the readers

alok

Kalyan said...

Simply elegant...the lovely words somehow touched a chord somewhere...these little notes sometimes provide the much needed inspiration in most times of our life...beautiful thoughts & well crafted in words!

Shubhodeep said...

as i said before... sensuous... so much of the senses involved in this.. (ok ok i know u know the meaning of sensuous :P)... really evocative!!!!

Paul said...

Annie: Is it grandiloquence or grandeloquence? Isn't that a pejorative - which obviously isn't what you meant?

I thought grandeloquent meant verbally over the top, bombastic, etc. But I'm too lazy to look it up in my online dictionary and this is more fun anyway...

Gulnaz: Eloquent!

{illyria} said...

i do believe it's "grandiloquence," paul. and i think annie didn't mean it pejoratively anyhow. :)

delightful, gulnaz! as always.

Anonymous said...

lovel prose gul,
these words melt so effortlessly and give such a wonderful texture to the thoughts which accompany them.
~anon

Madhu said...

This is so lovely!

gulnaz said...

annie- :))

cj- good to see you back! thanks!!

pat paulk- ah!! thank you!!

ashu- thanks lady!

janice thomson- *doffs my hat and bows*

Nasra- thank you!

alien- thanks and yea life is a bitter-sweet thing.

mermaid- that's a wonderful idea :)

alok- thank you, thank you!! :)

kaylan- :) grazie!

shubhodeep- :) thanks!

Paul- glad you think so!

illyria- thank you so much!!! :)

anon- am glad you enjoyed them so!

madhu- thanks! :)

Ashu said...

wish i cud c u on my blog too :)

Arti Honrao said...

Touching, Very touching!



GBU
Arti

slim whale said...

unfolding them will probably release all the tension? or aggravate it?

annie said...

@ Paul, Illyria & Gulnaz - Oh ofcourse, i dint mean 'grandiloquence' in a disparaging sense. You know it :)

you are amazing said...

may all the greatness of your hearts desires come true and they do..

more bliss to you...

may love and happiness radiate from you and return back to you multiplied, and it does...

here is a beautiful, amazing website of one of my friends for you to enjoy too...

www.theomegashift.com

more bliss to you x x

liam said...

there's sometimes nothing more intimate than a missive hidden amongst the rubble of a life.

thanks for sharing. it was touching.

africanfragments said...

beautiful, very poignant.

Shubhodeep said...

where'd you go? we miss you so...

Janice Thomson said...

Gulnaz, is everything ok?
You are missed.

gel said...

These thoughts like memory gems, glitter and pierce simultaneously. What a wonderful way you have with what seems like a casual question, yet contains layers of life notes.
(love "each crease a nervous tension")

David said...

i relate to this so well, remembering the notes I used to write when I was younger. I never sent them, lol. i was too nervous.

gulnaz said...

ahsu- sorry havent beeen coming by my own! :(

arti - thanks girl!

slim whale- dicey choice :)

annie- heyy chill :)

you are amazing- you reallly are :)

liam- damn funny little bits of paper eh

african fragments- thanks :)

shubhodeep- work :)

janice thomson- thank you for missing me, am ok and i hope you are too, i miss your haikus!

gel- oh you get a hug for that and a kiss too! ;)

david- yea i can imagine, we all go through that age. :)

diana christine said...

I have not visited you in a very long time but am delighted to find you here, kind of like going home and re-discovering a favorite beautiful meadow with streams of light pouring down on it. Thank you for so much beauty....

gulnaz said...

diana- your hugely hugely generous with praise and i am deeply deeply touched by your kind words thank you!

Arti Honrao said...

Knocking at your blog ... Update please!
BTW, blogrolled ya :)
All these days u were in book mark :D




GBU
Arti

Nabeel said...

hmm that's very interesting .. writing notes and hiding them .. perhaps in her purse and the dressing table. awww @ these little love notes. Mine would be neatly folded.