"We don't see things as they are. We see them as we are." - Anais Nin
I marvel through your words ...and its not an insanity ...touched by your words
nasra- thanks!! that means so much to me!! :))
ah... i love rain sooo much...here's a haiku:after the first rainspearly tears drip down slowlystaining window panes
shubho- its beautiful!!! thank you for sharing it!!
I loved the way u used the space ... gave it tht extra punchalso enjoyed the carefree attitude of the rain .....and finally the way u said "louldy oblivious"wht i had it for me - well rain to me is magic and to feel it in words is simply out of the worldas usual enjoyed it immenselyalok
btw ... forgot to mention15th august .... midnight rain ... awakened .... infinite moments .... and the obvious conquering feel ...Nah! I am just reading too much I guesstake care
alok- thank you so much for appreciating it so!! i love the rains...they make everything so clean and fresh...to use a cliche but its true right.glad you appreciated the formatting.i had written it a few days back and i love your interpretation of it. that is why i dont really like to put my words in context ususally. thank you!
I like the sentence, infinite raindrops, that's very true.
Talk about celebrating the self.Good for you.
nabeel- glad you think so too :)mermaid- i think in the end, all we have is ourselves :)
I love the sound of rain that your words recall. Just what we need right now in this dry summer heat.
came here through indianmuslims.in.nice blog.. you write really well:)
yafiah- i'm so happy that the words bought rains to your mind...it feels great to be able to do so. musafir- thanks for the compliment! :)
a feeling of infinite with a select finite words...lovely work Gulnaz...
amalendu- wow that pleased the cockles of my heart! :))
Lovely... i loved them... back here after a long time and it sure feels good... am going to spend some time reading through your older stuff too...
visions of summer, beautiful.haven't popped by in a while, enjoyed the previous posts to :)
alien- hey that is so sweet of you! thank you very much!! :))african fragments- yea long time no see. :) welcome and thanks! :)
you have such a gift w/ wordsI especially like how the stanzas compliment each other-
gel- thanks and you are kind with yours! :))i'm glad you appreciated the flow.
'loudly oblivious to all'? I like this one very much. I mean I like it LOUDLY :))
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