Friday, July 20, 2007

slices of thought

it takes only a glimmer of a memory to collectively start gushing like blood to my head...you.

the body remembers what the mind blocks...my skin turns upon me, the tips of my fingers betray me...a loud noise, a waterfall of emotions and how can i forget...what is it to be a woman...surrendering...bending...and flowing through your fingers like water....if you only knew how to catch me.

....just a whisper was wanted...where words are wasted...what needed to be founded...was what should have been lost...us

15 comments:

iamnasra said...

There so much magic in your writing ...go ur email will write u back

mermaid said...

How I have missed you! The talent, the truth, and the tears behind the beauty of breathing and living and writing about it thereafter.

Pecos Blue said...

Welcome back you were missed.

gulnaz said...

nasra: wow...thank you!!! i hope you mean it! :)

mermaid: awww sweets!! i dont know quite how to thank you for such loving and encouraging praise, i dont know if i am worthy of it!

pecos blue: and i missed you

floots said...

and you say i am romantic
this is sad and beautiful
thank you

Inside our hands, outside our hearts said...

Your writing reminds me of my early writings. Words spread out, deep emotions sent on fleeting wings.

I rather enjoyed this piece. I think I will spend part of the day getting to know your writing.

Anonymous said...

I read agan and still stand what I said before

Nasra

masti ki paathshala said...

wow realized how worthless words can be sometimes.

Nabeel said...

the first sentence is very .. well it caught my eyes, very nicely said. A glimmer of memory and the gushing like blood .. hmm :)

Alok said...

this is beautiful .... poignant and beautiful .....

alok

Shubhodeep said...

i have always loved ur writing even though i havent been able to follow up blogging as often as i want to. i luv ur use of stunning metaphors... cheers!!

hope ill see you at my blog sometime

gulnaz said...

floots- thanks! it takes one to know one. :)

inside our hands, outside our hearts- welcome....i love the beautiful way you have described my words...honoured really.

Nasra- you are a sweetheart,thats what you are!

masti ki paathshala- well masti is more than words...nah didnt like the way that sounds, lol, thank you very much, i hope you visit again. :)

alok- honoured! :)

shubhodeep- wow!!! thanks:) and am sorry for not visiting your site...just not gettting much time. :(

gulnaz said...

Masti ki Paathshala - there is some error with your blog address, it doesnt open...

gel said...

oh, i love this-
haunting, desolate and oh so romantic
I'm glad I stopped in. FOr some reason I thought you'd stopped blogging again. I'm VERY happy I'm mistaken.

gulnaz said...

gel- thank you so much for such an encouraging comment! thank you! i dont get to blog much but i don't want to stop totally either so i hope you won't visiting this space too. :)