Saturday, October 21, 2006

just a dream

walking these crowded streets, i'm aware only of your prescence which i cradle in my heart, wear it behind my knees. time trickles into droplets and unspeakable wetness whispers of you.


these dreams are for you. marshamallow sweet in colours of spun sugar.
you weave a web, the gold thread shimmers. the sun comes tossing blinding light like pennies to the poor.
floating in the lightness of the web, silky and gold....my awareness is compromised. i
ts only a dream after all.

dancing in a dream. i'm a solitary dancer. waltzing to the mood. unfurling whorls upon whorls, laying bare a truth, unspeakble....witheld.

21 comments:

Lorena said...

wow, i love the imagery...you have painted such a vivid piece. beautiful dream :)

zhoen said...

Let the unspeakable speak. Withold not the dance.

gulnaz said...

Lorena- thank you....happpy you enjoyed it. :)

Zhoen- thank you so much for that!

Cherie! said...

Eid - mubarak...may all your dreams come true this year.

NicoleBraganza said...

i'm aware only of your prescence which i cradle in my heart, wear it behind my knees.

- thats beautiful!

EID MUBARAK! May you be blessed with life's richest gifts.

Merryweather said...

wow! ... to die for! :)

mermaid said...

'i'm a solitary dancer. waltzing to the mood'

My favorite line.

Misreflection said...

Very nice .." its only a dream afterall".. hey dreams are a very real part of life..what some of us live for, sweets dreams always. :)... Eid Mubarak for monday / tues.. Enjoy...

{illyria} said...

too sweet. it's almost ethereal...

iamnasra said...

So calm your words comes in midist of the dancing sheers

Your words has evolved

May the first rays of eid be a blessing to you and your family
Luv
Nasra

zingtrial said...

...............Eid Mubarak............
Nice posting good wording.
Wish you a happy EID UL FITR

Amalendu said...

lovely reflection Gulnaz...

**Silvermoon** said...

delicious pungent imagery
"wear it behind my knees"
Sensual "unspeakable wetness whispers"
"marshmallow sweet in colours of spun sugar"
I feel that dream "stick"

M. Shahin said...

Beautiful reflection gulnaz. Wanted to wish you an excellent and spirited Eid!

Roger Stevens said...

That old sun tossing blinding light, eh?

How are you doing. Some great writing as always.

Hey - why do birds listen to erotica?

XXX

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Beautiful each colour raps round like a rainbow

gulnaz said...

Cherie- Eid mubarak to you too, may all your dreams come true too, thank you so much! XOXO

Nicole- ooh little one where have you been? so nice to see you, often wonderd where you have disappeared. thank you so much for your wishes! happy eid!

merryweather- reallllllllly (swooon) thanks!!!

mermaid- thanks sweetie! :))

Missy- thanks missy, eid is today on wednesday here in my part of the world...dreams make it worth the while.

illyria- thanks! i'm glad you see that, i had this dreamscape in mind...

nasra- thank you so much! eid mubrak to you and yours too!!! glad you liked this!

zingtrail- thnx!! eid mubarak!!!

amalendu- merci!

silvermoon- thank you so much for your generous praise!!

m.shahin- i liked how you added spirited eid, nobody has ever said that! thanks!!! wishing you a sweet sweeet sweet eid!

roger stevens- am flattered that you should think so!!! just through with a month of fasting, sort of have attained this nice calm feeling which unfortuantely comes in fleeting moments....not that evolved yet i guess. :)

birds listen to erotica because that is what keeps them flying high! ;)

hugS!!

Sue- its been ages since i saw a rainbow....so so happy that you liked it! thanks! XOX

Patry Francis said...

Oh, delicious, and all the more so because there's something a little sad here.

gulnaz said...

Patry- thank you so much! its lovely to see you here and its such a joy when somebody understands which you state only in shades. thank you

Mridula said...

Gulnaz, I rarely do it but will you care for a tag? I have tagged you from my blog.

gulnaz said...

Mridula- no problem, will post asap...:)