Tuesday, April 07, 2009

tonight

summer night showers
green grass tickles my feet
as you do my heart.

19 comments:

tikulicious said...

glittering raindrop necklace
clinging to a naked branch
reminiscent I smile

gulnaz said...

tiku- wow...this little verse has inspired at three others to write their own...this is fantastic! i am so happy to read your delicately beautiful verse!

Janice Thomson said...

What a delightful image you give us Gulnaz. I love this.

C.J.Duffy said...

A delicate touch beautifully done.

gulnaz said...

thanks Janice, your appreciation means much to me!

CJ- thank you *big warm hug* :)

Devika said...

WOW! so romantic! :)


wishes,
devika

Yafiah Katherine said...

I can feel the sensation of tickling on my feet and the scent of new grass in the air, on the breeze of a gentle night filled with the sound of crickets. Thank you, great.

Sue hardy-Dawson said...

Ah if only, here the grass is freezing cold in the night, it makes me long for summer

Alien said...

Sun streams past
The curtained window
Into my heart ...

Shails said...

I am here in your space after a span of about 2 years.Your writing is just as beautiful as ever.Hope everythings going good...

gulnaz said...

Devika- :) yea romance keeps us buzzing

Yafiah- *deep bow* deeply honoured :)

Sue- hold on...it's coming ;)

Alien- WOW!!!! :)

Shails- My god you remembred to come back after 2 years but why the haitus...thanks a lot though for the appreciation! :)

Brood Mode said...

This almost made me blush

SAMMb said...

delicately beautiful.

Lynne said...

Delicious
Your poetry often uses nature images that make me smile and mmmmmm imagining.

gulnaz said...

Brood Mode, SAAMb, Lynne- thank you so much!!! deeply flattered!

Amalendu said...

lovely...I smell Pablo Neruda in you...

gulnaz said...

Amalendu- now that's a compliment... am reallly motivated! thanks! where have u been? r u on facebook? new updates on your blog?

Amalendu said...

No not yet....in orkut...yet to explore facebook....but you motivated me...I will come up with something in 2 days time...

Vinod said...

Bohot Khoob..! :)