"We don't see things as they are. We see them as we are." - Anais Nin
"my heart loses trackand maybe somedayit will speak"Gulnaz it had stopped speaking to me for a long time methinks ... I loved the endingAlok
alok - :) isnt it strange like that :) thanks it just seemed to fit, abrupt... a clean cut.
You have broken my heart, but, it was done with perfectly crafted words!!
Great emphatic ending. This read as clear as a bell.
pat paulk- did i know? :) ... thanks!boulies - thanks! you got it! :)
brevity is beautiful, too. but you knew that, you accomplished writer you. :)
illyria- i just, just, thought of you!! i love the picutre...honestly you are on my list of hope-to-meet-one-day people!x.
nice way of saying this....I disagree...it is so lyrical Gulnaz....
great to be back...!! and am I happy to read ur words!!
amalendu- just the music of the seasons...alien- thanks! ;)
more words to fill the head and twist the heart. soulful and honest.HIYA!
who says it is not ... maybe bitter but is ... i like it
to the point. nice to read your words again
but are you going to be someone else's valentine then?
It may not be lyrical, but its is definitely powerful!
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