I like this.I knocked and the door opened, but I found I'd been knocking from the inside" I read it somewhere thought I'll share this with you .All the best :) .
anon- well...i stopped at that because for me it was a moment which i tried to capture and hene a haiku. i am happy that it inspired you to write on further...:) you are welcome to do that, glad you liked it so. thanks!
enemy of the republic- thanks will check it out ;)
mermaid- sit back, close your eyes and imagine the pink tiny blossoms nodding their heads, as the light evening breeze murmurs god knows what ancient lore to them....:)
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Gulnaz,
What beauty in the picture that you offer us. This has a sweetness about it. Thank you
I like this.I knocked and the door opened, but I found I'd been knocking from the inside" I read it somewhere thought I'll share this with you .All the best :) .
:-)
Ahh, so beautiful Gulnaz...one can sense the whisperings of the breeze in your lovely haiku
beautiful Gulnaz ..... i saw blossoming life gaining experience and enjoying the beauty of life in ur words ... pardon me for reading it my way ...
absolutely fantastic
alok
inside our hands, outside our hearts- thank you for seeing it so. :)
Zingtrail- thats an inspring thought, thanks!
alien- hey you got a nice smile. :)
janice thomson- ahh...i only try...you are the one who writes LOVELY haikus!!
alok- oh please, i love you the way you interpret my stuff, i'm flattered...thank you so much!!
oh gul.. why did u stop! why the hell did u stop!!
if i may...
nodding blossoms-
listening to tales
of the evening breeze
humming melodies
of few molten dreams
till
figments of sunshine
encapsulate
true colors of silence
deep with-in, I stil breathe
sorry.. cudn't resist..
~anon
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anon- well...i stopped at that because for me it was a moment which i tried to capture and hene a haiku.
i am happy that it inspired you to write on further...:)
you are welcome to do that, glad you liked it so. thanks!
enemy of the republic- thanks will check it out ;)
beautifully observed
thank you
floots- hey its me who should thank you!!
What a sweet lullaby. I'm peaceful just reading this.
mermaid- sit back, close your eyes and imagine the pink tiny blossoms nodding their heads, as the light evening breeze murmurs god knows what ancient lore to them....:)
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