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full moon---
a cat peeps
from the bushes
night breeze--
ruffles my hair
into smiling
silver of the moon on the darkness of the sky. darker still outlines of trees near and far and me a dark silhouette pacing amongst all this finery. Walking to beats thumping from the headphones, enjoying the contrast, being here and yet also there. Walking in circles, again and again till one steps into the zone and eyes close to make the moment absolute.
Walking in moonlight is always such pleasure!
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:) silverine!
Have I invited you to Spilled to Bloodlessness, our poetry, photo, what the hell, creative site. My email is Sadness2joy22@aol.com I would be honored to have you.
e- the pleasure is mine! :)
enemy of the republic- i'd be honoured! :) travelling for the next few days...
beautiful moonlight stanzas indeed, gulnaz. i've been dying to walk out of my home into that patch of light that always hits the same spot come evening.
i've missed your words; so sorry to have been absent. things have been too busy as of late. xx.
..ruffles my hair
into smiling"
is a beautifully succint way to capture this scene and feeling of mystery, freedom, otherness...and sensuality - like fingers run through your hair
:-)
mike
Pain is always the most creative emotions ..:))
I am sure u are from Mumbai
full moon...
a cat peeps
from the bushes
I relate it so much when I see my son...
It is lovely Gulnaz...
'Enjoying the contrast.' I did, too:)
hmmm, finding absolute moments
in stillness of one's own shadow, accompanied by mellifluous music of silence,
sprinkled with full moonlight and
and cool breeze;
ah! supreme peace!
"full moon---
a cat peeps
from the bushes
night breeze--
ruffles my hair
into smiling"
I like the playful quality especially of 'ruffles.'
Moonlight is also one of my favorite things and Moonlight sonata by Beethoven is even better :-)
Hi! This is nice reading.Love reading whenever I get here I feel happy and refrashed He!He!He!.
Once again thanks for sharing.
Wish you well
P.S. Did you see the moon on the 14th.
You could write things about how beautiful it was.
Ah...the season of the witch!
illyria- and i hope you got to stand in the la luna spotlight.... i can understand sometimes time is too tight but i really appreciate your feedback...xxx
mike smith- welcome and thank you so much for your appreciating it so! :)
hazel dream- as much as i like the city, i'm not from mumbai...from the hinterlands of india. ;)
cherie- thanks girl...but i did miss the moon shine...some pleasures are best enjoyed alone.
texas haijin- thank you! :)
amalendu- i can see why it makes you think of your new born son and am glad for it...thank you! :)
mermaid- thanks girl!!
anon- Exactly!!! whoever you are, thank you!!!
m.shahin- yep beethoven is good, far good than my silly words....there is something so ancient and mystical about the moon. i'm glad you liked it, thanks!
zingtrail- i'm so happy that my words make you feel so. its a compliment i would cherish. thank you!! wishing you well too!
velvetgunther- bewitched yet? :)
the mystery of walking in the moonlight. it can be scary too. love the imagery here.
lorena- sure it can be that too! :)
ooh so lovely!
How can I not love this with my blog titled "Shadows in the Moonlight?"
I imagine you... shared moonlight serenades
silvermoon- thanks! we share our enjoyment of la luna! :)
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