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walking these crowded streets, i'm aware only of your prescence which i cradle in my heart, wear it behind my knees. time trickles into droplets and unspeakable wetness whispers of you.
these dreams are for you. marshamallow sweet in colours of spun sugar.
you weave a web, the gold thread shimmers. the sun comes tossing blinding light like pennies to the poor.
floating in the lightness of the web, silky and gold....my awareness is compromised. its only a dream after all.
dancing in a dream. i'm a solitary dancer. waltzing to the mood. unfurling whorls upon whorls, laying bare a truth, unspeakble....witheld.
20 comments:
wow, i love the imagery...you have painted such a vivid piece. beautiful dream :)
Let the unspeakable speak. Withold not the dance.
Lorena- thank you....happpy you enjoyed it. :)
Zhoen- thank you so much for that!
i'm aware only of your prescence which i cradle in my heart, wear it behind my knees.
- thats beautiful!
EID MUBARAK! May you be blessed with life's richest gifts.
wow! ... to die for! :)
'i'm a solitary dancer. waltzing to the mood'
My favorite line.
Very nice .." its only a dream afterall".. hey dreams are a very real part of life..what some of us live for, sweets dreams always. :)... Eid Mubarak for monday / tues.. Enjoy...
too sweet. it's almost ethereal...
So calm your words comes in midist of the dancing sheers
Your words has evolved
May the first rays of eid be a blessing to you and your family
Luv
Nasra
...............Eid Mubarak............
Nice posting good wording.
Wish you a happy EID UL FITR
lovely reflection Gulnaz...
delicious pungent imagery
"wear it behind my knees"
Sensual "unspeakable wetness whispers"
"marshmallow sweet in colours of spun sugar"
I feel that dream "stick"
Beautiful reflection gulnaz. Wanted to wish you an excellent and spirited Eid!
That old sun tossing blinding light, eh?
How are you doing. Some great writing as always.
Hey - why do birds listen to erotica?
XXX
Beautiful each colour raps round like a rainbow
Cherie- Eid mubarak to you too, may all your dreams come true too, thank you so much! XOXO
Nicole- ooh little one where have you been? so nice to see you, often wonderd where you have disappeared. thank you so much for your wishes! happy eid!
merryweather- reallllllllly (swooon) thanks!!!
mermaid- thanks sweetie! :))
Missy- thanks missy, eid is today on wednesday here in my part of the world...dreams make it worth the while.
illyria- thanks! i'm glad you see that, i had this dreamscape in mind...
nasra- thank you so much! eid mubrak to you and yours too!!! glad you liked this!
zingtrail- thnx!! eid mubarak!!!
amalendu- merci!
silvermoon- thank you so much for your generous praise!!
m.shahin- i liked how you added spirited eid, nobody has ever said that! thanks!!! wishing you a sweet sweeet sweet eid!
roger stevens- am flattered that you should think so!!! just through with a month of fasting, sort of have attained this nice calm feeling which unfortuantely comes in fleeting moments....not that evolved yet i guess. :)
birds listen to erotica because that is what keeps them flying high! ;)
hugS!!
Sue- its been ages since i saw a rainbow....so so happy that you liked it! thanks! XOX
Oh, delicious, and all the more so because there's something a little sad here.
Patry- thank you so much! its lovely to see you here and its such a joy when somebody understands which you state only in shades. thank you
Gulnaz, I rarely do it but will you care for a tag? I have tagged you from my blog.
Mridula- no problem, will post asap...:)
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