i'm lost and blown away carry me home scar tissues, purple and blue mama's kisses don't make them good now. battle weary beliefs how long will i carry their torn banner autumn fires make me think about you and i don't even know your name.
A torn leaf, or maybe a heart, or maybe even a letter.
We lost you last November. Autumn does not have to be the foreshadowing of an ominous winter. It could be a reminder to rest and savor the warmth within.
soulful melody! as fresh as ever :) which signifies: kisses do work, beliefs though weary, still, have enough strength to help you with your search for your HOME.
Hey you write a poem for us all.. thank you.. :)Let time do its job and in the meanwhile I hope you find ways in which to nurse your bruises. Lots of love as always.
Pecos Blue- yes i think you are right, its when we are ready for something, that that something arrives. :) thanks!
manu- awwww please!!! now don't be such a fool! and remember good stuff even if its not asked for, is good nonetheless, you need to learn to appreciate what you got. :)
missy- i'm glad you think so! :) kisses!!!
Roger Stevens- this is so good!!! thank you!!!!!!!!!
Sue- am honoured that YOU should think so!
Hazel dream- perhaps... :)
dirty joke sir- thank you and what a cute pic, keep coming!
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One day, you will know the name
Longing for that one person. Universal in heart, description and even pain. Excellent poem!!
A torn leaf, or maybe a heart, or maybe even a letter.
We lost you last November. Autumn does not have to be the foreshadowing of an ominous winter. It could be a reminder to rest and savor the warmth within.
lovely write Gulnaz...
Very beautiful with an ache to it. This poem was very touching and heartfelt. Thank you for sharing it with us :-)
Lovely poem,I am particularly interested in Asians writing in English and I know there quite a few of us who do that..keep in touch
This is good writing.I am glad you are you and shared it with others.Thanks liked it
Wish you well my friend
soulful melody!
as fresh as ever :)
which signifies:
kisses do work,
beliefs though weary,
still,
have enough strength
to help you
with your search for your HOME.
velvetgunther- god willing! thanks for the visit, keep coming by!
Pat Paulk- thank you!!!! i was having doubts about posting it...thouhgt it was silly and childish but well i felt it, so...
Mermaid- oh this means so much to me!!! thanks! XOXOX
amalendu- thank you! come back again! :)
m. shahin- am so happy that you liked it, i wasnt so sure about posting it initially. :)
plus ultra- sure will!! thank you!!
zingtrail- oh you keep me wishing me well!! :)
sometimes i'm not so glad to be me, such a nice thing to be told. thank you, and keep visiting!
anon- you are such a sweetheart whoever you are, god bless you!!!! XOXOXO!!!
vibhor- i hope so too..... thank you! come by again!
this was very strong I liked it--hope you learn the name when you are ready.
if wishes were true and horses could fly
then that wud be me.
but then
the only good things we get are the one's we wish for, the rest are all unwanted good, bad or ugly, unwanted all the same
Hey you write a poem for us all.. thank you.. :)Let time do its job and in the meanwhile I hope you find ways in which to nurse your bruises. Lots of love as always.
Mama's kisses.
Papa's hand.
A sky you remember
But can't understand.
Friends who are shadows.
And were you to blame?
He promised you so much -
But held back his name.
Lovely poem so sad and plaintive like the end of the summer
A fallen tear
searching for cheek to rest ??
or torn emotion searching for tears??
is that a fallen leaf in spring
crying at her destiny ??
Pecos Blue- yes i think you are right, its when we are ready for something, that that something arrives. :) thanks!
manu- awwww please!!! now don't be such a fool! and remember good stuff even if its not asked for, is good nonetheless, you need to learn to appreciate what you got. :)
missy- i'm glad you think so! :) kisses!!!
Roger Stevens- this is so good!!! thank you!!!!!!!!!
Sue- am honoured that YOU should think so!
Hazel dream- perhaps... :)
dirty joke sir- thank you and what a cute pic, keep coming!
cherie- merci mon cherie! :)
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