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lazy sunday afternoon
chochlate covered berries
sun soaked raisins
warm tangerine juice on warmly kissed skin
how beautiful to be slipping by under the rushing sun like silk through your fingers.
speak softly, when you speak softly, oh how beautiful, when you speak softly
too soon, too soon, the afternoon passes when you are near.
when your breath touches my ear, cabernet colours stains the sky and all beneath.
fly me away and meet me on the other side.
dreams of you make me pass the night.
anoint my honey skin
lost in your heartbeats
your words lost in your sound
your sound lost in mine
mine i cannot even hear now
as the bird on the flowering branch, trills a song, hidden between the leaves and so all one sees is the flower which moves and the sound which moves it and know in our hearts the thought which makes the bird sings and brings the scene alive...intermingling the thought, the sound and the song...to make a memory.
28 comments:
"intermingling the thought, the sound and the song...to make a memory"
nice imagery!
its so good to see you back in full flow! hope you will continue like this...wonderful to read you as always.
my my
isnt someone in love
what love can make one write, create think..........
hmmmm
manu
And how sweet to create a portrait with words and images over an actual picture.
Realised you're bloggin again when I saw your comment on Anil's blog - great to read you again! Cheers!
and then...
these memoirs would intermingle
resulting in a multi-dimensional space with dimensions as bygone dreams;
redefining your past, offering
unconditional warmth to help you blend your present with ur future!
Good, you are back to your very best. Take Care!
brood mode- thank you, glad you liked it. :)
anil- don't say that makes me nervous...but good to be back in this space! :)
manu- its all in the head...i think i am in love with the idea of love, that's all.
cherie- ....and what a beautiful nick...thank you! i hope you visit again. :)
mermaid- thanks sweetie!
geebaby- you are so sweet, thank you! :)
anon- awwwwwwww....such lovely words and no name! :( thank you so very much but please leave you name too....it would be nice to know.
It does sound like life is more than okay!
"how beautiful to be slipping by under the rushing sun like silk through your fingers"
That will stay with me for a while. What a lovely line of prose. I second those who applaud your return.
how beautiful these lovely words. i was brisked away with the imagery of birds singing.
so lovely too see your light shining through! :)
i've missed your writing.
PB- heheh...if only it were so!!! :)
time*time- aaah! so kind of you! thank you!!! :)
Eden- thanks girl! :) cheers to you too!
Lorena- so it was you, you little bird! :))) sooo sweet of you, thank you!!! and you are too kind!
these lines make me feel that life is really worthwhile...ty!
Keshi.
Speak softly, my love.
You write well :)
welcome back Gs, ;) love the tangerine juice on warmly kissed skin bit.. where did that come from?
what wud u say gul,
whats better or for worse
the idea of love or love itself
isnt it love that wud make us but the idea of love is what we always think back with hindsight and wish it had rather been love or a boo boo instead
Keshi- my turn to say thank you!!! :)
velvetgunther- gee, thanks! :))
missy- oh i lurrrv citrusy smells and mixed up flavours! :) probably the heat is making me think up silly things. :)
manu- i didnt understand of word of what you have just asked me. i probably need a sugar fix! :)
Just came by your blog-
Incredible! Love-woven...
And especially these lines:
"your words lost in your sound
your sound lost in mine.."
I dissolved :)
"...to make a memory." Call it Harmony :)
merryweather- :):) yeah it sure makes for sweeet harmonies! :))
keep coming by often...you make it merry. :)
Superb as always....didn't know u r back again...
Wow. I bumped into your blog after you had stopped writing it and waiting for a couple of months for you to post again. I don't know you but it's wonderful to have you writing again. Just checked on an off chance today. Glad to see you back.
sparkling and poetic, gulnaz, and so delightful to read over and over.
try ginger ale instead.........
southpaw- thank you!! that's a mean looking tatto there...cool. :)
moizza- its really sweet of you to check upon me....hugs! :) glad you enjoyed my stuff.
{illyria}- if you think so, then, my day is made! yippeee, let me go jumping! am in awe of your stuff!!
manu again and again- hmm....naaah.
this is what i was missing
this this this....
"cabernet colours stains the sky"
doesn't get any better.
CJ- and me your sweet flattery....thanks! :))
This leaves me breathless.
incredible imagery- I like the food/fruits of the earth references and this area sung to me sweetly:
"when your breath touches my ear, cabernet colours stains the sky and all beneath.
fly me away and meet me on the other side.
dreams of you make me pass the night.
anoint my honey skin"-
Luscious!
silvermoon- oh you are so sweet!!!
thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!
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