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love is a place & through this place of love move(with brightness of peace)all places
yes is a world & in this world of yes live(skilfully curled)all worlds - e.e.cummings
I have never been able to complain to you about my nights which have collapsed fruitlessly into the dust of a soiled dawn for you deserve a soul in whose presence the world comes together for all eternity.
i touch your shirt sleeve, the cotton warm with your heart. a sensation i carry on my fingertips till today.
communiques of intimacy, all too soon over and yet unending.
28 comments:
nice gul.. this plays in ur mind with perfection and yes: sensation that ensues: unending :)
~anon
an honest confession: jealous of how closely you follow ur thoughts.
the tiny details, like the spices in the food, each adding its own flavour
~anon
anon - i'm flattered and intrigued....thanks...as for following my thoughts... i do it sometimes and its a pain in the neck :)
do you have a blog or something like that?
Gulnaz...
You said it so well, poetically...
that was a poetry, i know :-)
The Certain Kind is a bit depressed with you, though...waiting..waiting..waiting.Socio-political updated too..
Holy Eid!
see again..
devika
Such soulful writing... Amazing.. Am gonna visit again... :)
Not everybody can put it in such flavour.. U r blessed..
-Bhargavi
its lovely...it leaves a aching feeling or, perhaps, a sense of incompleteness...that is the beauty of poetry and especially when it comes from Gulnaz...
Beautiful!
abstract and deep...
liked it
MIP
No wonder you have been published with words like these. Alluring, seductive (and thats just the words!).
where are you Gulnaz??
gone for Eid?
Miss you! Come back soon :-)
devika
devika- thanks sweetie!
bhargavi - well that's really sweet of you!
Amalendu - yea that's life na :) thanks!
MIP - honoured! :)
CJ- :) you are a charmer but hey havent been published yet
Ah, but your soul has come together to describe that moment. Even if the realization came later, it came, and I hope you are filled with its beauty.
mermaid- love you! ;)
its speechless that takes me..a land tht I wish and desire to be through you words ...I aspire to live it.. if it will ever fall in my hand ..
Nasra Al Adawi
ah Gulnaz...you have such a way with words - they open so many doors to our thoughts.
a soul in who's presence the world comes together for all eternity.....gulnaz you make the hairs at the nape of my neck stand on end...seriously i do so enjoy, that you can express yourself so poetically....brillllliant
gulnaz i sent your blog address to a friend...he is hopelessly in love with your work...seriously thinks it is absolutely great, and that you should get yourself published...i second that with all my heart...will you do it...or if you have done it...let me know...
african fragments - rouhana...it just seemed right honestly you are too generous with your praise! and thank you for sharing my stuff with another and it definitely feels nice to be liked! somebody has approached me to publish but it hasn't happened yet...if it happens inshallah you'll know for sure!!! ;)
Nasra- i love it that my words can make you feel so but you know its not the words alone...its the stuff we share in our lives.
Janice - thank you, thank you, thank you!!! means a lot to me that you should say that, as i believe you pack a punch with your verses, i really love them!
hmm
death -hmm indeed :)
i miss you at Certain Kind, my soul mate :-)
this is an initation to share something...come sometime if you care...
wishes!
devika
"all too soon over and yet unending"
how beautiful and true...you captured the essence of a moment, a feeling!
devika- sorry for not visiting...will do.
stella - thanks, just one of those moments when the words were in sync with my thoughts. ;)
thanks Gulnaz...i was feling very left out ever since you went off :-))
devika
Hi Gulnaz
Good to hear you're still around. have a new little musical project her... pop along and say hello.
Any new poetry in the offing?
http://pblf.blogspot.com/
Roger
Are you on Facebook yet?
Hi Gulnaz some lovely sensory words I picked apples today and it reminded me of your pathway
Roger - good to see you too :)
Sue- thanks and what a lovely way to spend an afternoon...picking apples...and am flattered that you were reminded of my silly lil blog. ;)
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