"We don't see things as they are. We see them as we are." - Anais Nin
"my heart loses trackand maybe somedayit will speak"Gulnaz it had stopped speaking to me for a long time methinks ... I loved the endingAlok
alok - :) isnt it strange like that :) thanks it just seemed to fit, abrupt... a clean cut.
You have broken my heart, but, it was done with perfectly crafted words!!
Great emphatic ending. This read as clear as a bell.
pat paulk- did i know? :) ... thanks!boulies - thanks! you got it! :)
brevity is beautiful, too. but you knew that, you accomplished writer you. :)
illyria- i just, just, thought of you!! i love the picutre...honestly you are on my list of hope-to-meet-one-day people!x.
nice way of saying this....I disagree...it is so lyrical Gulnaz....
great to be back...!! and am I happy to read ur words!!
amalendu- just the music of the seasons...alien- thanks! ;)
more words to fill the head and twist the heart. soulful and honest.HIYA!
who says it is not ... maybe bitter but is ... i like it
to the point. nice to read your words again
but are you going to be someone else's valentine then?
mmmm- strong
It may not be lyrical, but its is definitely powerful!
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"my heart loses track
and maybe someday
it will speak"
Gulnaz it had stopped speaking to me for a long time methinks ... I loved the ending
Alok
alok - :) isnt it strange like that :) thanks it just seemed to fit, abrupt... a clean cut.
You have broken my heart, but, it was done with perfectly crafted words!!
Great emphatic ending. This read as clear as a bell.
pat paulk- did i know? :) ... thanks!
boulies - thanks! you got it! :)
brevity is beautiful, too. but you knew that, you accomplished writer you. :)
illyria- i just, just, thought of you!! i love the picutre...honestly you are on my list of hope-to-meet-one-day people!
x.
illyria- i just, just, thought of you!! i love the picutre...honestly you are on my list of hope-to-meet-one-day people!
x.
nice way of saying this....I disagree...it is so lyrical Gulnaz....
great to be back...!! and am I happy to read ur words!!
amalendu- just the music of the seasons...
alien- thanks! ;)
more words to fill the head and twist the heart. soulful and honest.
HIYA!
who says it is not ... maybe bitter but is ... i like it
to the point. nice to read your words again
but are you going to be someone else's valentine then?
mmmm- strong
It may not be lyrical, but its is definitely powerful!
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