it takes only a glimmer of a memory to collectively start gushing like blood to my head...you.
the body remembers what the mind blocks...my skin turns upon me, the tips of my fingers betray me...a loud noise, a waterfall of emotions and how can i forget...what is it to be a woman...surrendering...bending...and flowing through your fingers like water....if you only knew how to catch me.
....just a whisper was wanted...where words are wasted...what needed to be founded...was what should have been lost...us
15 comments:
There so much magic in your writing ...go ur email will write u back
How I have missed you! The talent, the truth, and the tears behind the beauty of breathing and living and writing about it thereafter.
Welcome back you were missed.
nasra: wow...thank you!!! i hope you mean it! :)
mermaid: awww sweets!! i dont know quite how to thank you for such loving and encouraging praise, i dont know if i am worthy of it!
pecos blue: and i missed you
and you say i am romantic
this is sad and beautiful
thank you
Your writing reminds me of my early writings. Words spread out, deep emotions sent on fleeting wings.
I rather enjoyed this piece. I think I will spend part of the day getting to know your writing.
I read agan and still stand what I said before
Nasra
wow realized how worthless words can be sometimes.
the first sentence is very .. well it caught my eyes, very nicely said. A glimmer of memory and the gushing like blood .. hmm :)
this is beautiful .... poignant and beautiful .....
alok
i have always loved ur writing even though i havent been able to follow up blogging as often as i want to. i luv ur use of stunning metaphors... cheers!!
hope ill see you at my blog sometime
floots- thanks! it takes one to know one. :)
inside our hands, outside our hearts- welcome....i love the beautiful way you have described my words...honoured really.
Nasra- you are a sweetheart,thats what you are!
masti ki paathshala- well masti is more than words...nah didnt like the way that sounds, lol, thank you very much, i hope you visit again. :)
alok- honoured! :)
shubhodeep- wow!!! thanks:) and am sorry for not visiting your site...just not gettting much time. :(
Masti ki Paathshala - there is some error with your blog address, it doesnt open...
oh, i love this-
haunting, desolate and oh so romantic
I'm glad I stopped in. FOr some reason I thought you'd stopped blogging again. I'm VERY happy I'm mistaken.
gel- thank you so much for such an encouraging comment! thank you! i dont get to blog much but i don't want to stop totally either so i hope you won't visiting this space too. :)
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