glimpses of memories
m i s p l a c e d
still shivering leaves
..........................rain lashed
........................................and dripping
beats from a drum
boom boom boom
getting higher
tripping away
free in the air
your love
free in the air
words destructured
form broken
new meanings found
yet the old not fortgotten
the beats in the air
free
the beats in my head
so wild and free
like you ....so free
15 comments:
Freedom.. the eternal human quest. Good stuff
makes me think of glastonbury. lord knows why. all that feel of space and freedom maybe. good though, very good.
smita- thanks girl and its a priceless commodity!
CJ- :) funny that you should thnk of glastonbury, as i was writing it, even though i'm miles away and our rains are quite differnt, its exactly the kind of place i was thinking of and the music! :) so happy that you liked it and i'm so happy it made u think so. :)
Reminds me of, "Listen to the rhythm of the falling rain..." somehow. Neat!
thank god u wrote! Gul a nice beginning! boom boom boom!
just let it free!
~anon
i've just recently been back myself. oh, how i've missed you and your beautiful words.
e - i havent heard that one i think....who has done it but i am damn pleased that it reminds you of a song, i love songs!
anon- awww :)
illyria - you sweet girl!!!!
you are just too sweet!! thank yo!! xxoxx i had been to yours recently and i noticed the not here signboard, so i'm happy that my favourite one is back.
gul,
if i may,
something i have oft repeated
and i think to you too once.
the one freedom we are all given, though a vast majority of us, give it away
and thats the freedom to move,
move what, move our minds, move our thoughts, move all that we chose not to accept as is where is.
move ourselves.
isnt that what differs us from the rose bush withering in the sun, drying, dying whatever
good to read you after a long time.. :)
pallavi- thanks but i'm just not fininding enough time to kind of sit back and let the thoughts flow thru :(
these words definately have a beat.. i like!
great you are back.
yeah free
break free
of the shackles,
free like a bird,
to be where i want to be .
nomadic soul- good, i like words with beat :)
masti ki paathshala - your name says it all and your words speak even more. thanks!
dancing to our own pulse
always the best
(i think i'll play a melody though - my dancing is not good) :)
floots- you are right :)
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