Nice and haiku-like, I especially like the first stanza. A driving rain does somehow make you feel metaphorically "hungry," even though I can't say how logically!
Hiya, hopped over here from Venus' blog, you seem to have a wonderful way with words. But I have this mindblock against poems and haikus, they never reach me :) Read some of your non-poem/haiku posts. Neat.
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...more like tidbits for thought.
This is just brilliantly done. Well-threaded use of words in these circumstances.
oh my gosh, such powerful images and feelings in so few words...
you say so much with just a few verses. BEAUTIFUL.
that would be me "a hungry heart"
and the last image, so tender :)
This took the longest time to show up on my bloglines...welcome back....
Lovely contrast between the two verses.
Welcome back!
:-)
Cecilia- thank you and thanks also for stopping by. I hope you visit again. :)
feminine expressions- life is wrapped in lil things. aint it so?
Lorena- i knew you could relate to it! :) thanks!
Joel- thank you and i hope you are doing good. :)
.:A:. - that is the thing with contrast, who can say which is better and somtimes the contrast itself is the 'thing'.
its nice to be welcomed back. :)
sad and soulful, don't stave your heart.. :-P
Very nice. I've been trying to write more poetry lately. J and I had a "date" and wrote silly poetry together the other night. It was fun.
Keep it up!
Welcome Back :-)
finnegan- i had been away catching up with freinds, coffee, conversation, ciggarettes...that kind of stuff...good stuff! :)
...thank you!!! :)
Missy- just like a rainy day :)
Bethin Portland- thanks and thanks for stopping by, do come again!
Geetanjali- is the sweetheart in the picture you? if yes, then you just stole my heart away! :)
Nice and haiku-like, I especially like the first stanza. A driving rain does somehow make you feel metaphorically "hungry," even though I can't say how logically!
hungry heart and tear drop; very beautiful!
good to see you back alive again!
Hiya, hopped over here from Venus' blog, you seem to have a wonderful way with words. But I have this mindblock against poems and haikus, they never reach me :) Read some of your non-poem/haiku posts. Neat.
Lovely! Hungry for more :-)
Luv
Arundhati
wow. such a tender, poignant comeback.
Enjoying your poetry very much.
2 verses and simply beautiful,the words and the images they evoked in me!
:)
how have you been?
Wow, such talent you have. Impressive short (but very full) poem! Don't be sad my sweet!
you make one incredible return... missed you but the poem is wonderful!
Hope you're not feeling sad, lovely lonely words
Paul - emotions are illogical to begin with :)
glad you liked it.
Venus- thanks and thanks again for the welcome :)
sensiblystoned- thanks and am glad you enjoyed your visit to my space, never mind the poems :)
Arundhati - hey thanks! that is so sweeet of you!
transi- thanks darling, your words are always encouraging to me!
Broken spectre- am so glad that you enjoyed my stuff, do visit again. :)
Jyo - am good thanks...how are you? you are such a sensitive soul, that is why they evoke those images.
tomas- am i glad....its the best when i can make somebody smile with my words
yvaine- no, i am not crying anymore...thanks...it is so sweet of you to care! i hope things are going good with you.
Russell- awww russell!!! :))) thanks!
Stella- missed you too! danke schon danke schon danke schon!!! :)
Sue- am ok and you are a sweetheart to care!
i'm not very good with this but is this a haiku or just a regular brilliant poem?
CJ- i don't like labels either. :)...am glad that you liked it.
sweet...
Interesting blog! Bookmarking you!
~ Arun
Mitzee- thanks!
Arun- thank you and do come again sir! :)
Mitzee- thanks!
Arun- thank you and do come again sir! :)
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