tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post112187653781601320..comments2023-10-18T14:17:04.846+05:30Comments on ~Apple Pathways~: togethernessgulnazhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04303326222747011474noreply@blogger.comBlogger39125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122222971437784072005-07-24T22:06:00.000+05:302005-07-24T22:06:00.000+05:30finnegan, mmm....yeah i'm vouyeristic like that, p...finnegan, mmm....yeah i'm vouyeristic like that, peeping into other people's dreams. :)<BR/><BR/>thank you for your sweet words, kind sir. :)<BR/><BR/>Potted-flower, is the coooolest one. :)gulnazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04303326222747011474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122144889631311152005-07-24T00:24:00.000+05:302005-07-24T00:24:00.000+05:30SS, i am not quite sure how to answer that. :)SS, i am not quite sure how to answer that. :)gulnazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04303326222747011474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122137473234329212005-07-23T22:21:00.000+05:302005-07-23T22:21:00.000+05:30Gulnaaz,I am one of those silent admirers that you...Gulnaaz,<BR/>I am one of those silent admirers that you attract to your blog. The reason I was silent coz I could not understand ( I have very low IQ) your poetry.<BR/><BR/>Would it be too much for you to write a post script explaning what;s going on with moon and who is bruised and thinsg like that? It will help me admire you more..<BR/><BR/>Thats all.<BR/><BR/>SSYe manzilen !!https://www.blogger.com/profile/16375104650729573677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122110847717956612005-07-23T14:57:00.000+05:302005-07-23T14:57:00.000+05:30Mermaid, oops! i'm so sorry, i don't know how i ...Mermaid, oops! i'm so sorry, i don't know how i missed you, sorry. :(<BR/>When you have lived long enough, you do collect some bruises along the way and so the, 'bruised' for the sky also because of the colour of bruises. :)<BR/><BR/>Pins, lovely to have you back! you are just too sweet to me! :)<BR/>not that i'm complaining. ;)<BR/><BR/>Anumita, ah!! from someone who can make me cry with her posts! ...sweet! :)<BR/><BR/>Jamie, yes. :) we all need to be carried don't we?<BR/><BR/>Everyseven, what do i say to that! thanks, i am so glad you enjoy coming here. i just wing it most of times, never knowing whether i will be able to do it again. :) i really liked you comparing it to fresh organic produce and i love the smell of freshly baked bread! <BR/><BR/>Pottded-flower, good to have you back, was wondering where you had disappeared. :) <BR/>thanks for adding your lines!<BR/>:)gulnazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04303326222747011474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122064136438267882005-07-23T01:58:00.000+05:302005-07-23T01:58:00.000+05:30Hey, you forgot me.Hey, you forgot me.mermaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15895749686844178804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122036879681038332005-07-22T18:24:00.000+05:302005-07-22T18:24:00.000+05:30I like thinking that the night sky is "carrying" t...I like thinking that the night sky is "carrying" the moon. Somehow, it's a comforting thought.Jamie Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11036600186909466411noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122029572283012262005-07-22T16:22:00.000+05:302005-07-22T16:22:00.000+05:30Mesmerising! And they are merely 6 little lines. Y...Mesmerising! And they are merely 6 little lines. You create magic, Gulnaz!anumitahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04801367425344899569noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122023309691336652005-07-22T14:38:00.000+05:302005-07-22T14:38:00.000+05:30So delicately put! Somehow I can't help but think ...So delicately put! Somehow I can't help but think you are that way too :)Pincushionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14064798658006886544noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122022605233345742005-07-22T14:26:00.000+05:302005-07-22T14:26:00.000+05:30Stan laurel, thank you for enjoying it so much, it...Stan laurel, thank you for enjoying it so much, it feels good. :)<BR/><BR/>Anon, hmm....thanks...peace.<BR/><BR/>Sk8RN, awww thanks!! :)<BR/><BR/>.:A:., am honoured that you think so.<BR/><BR/>Mridula, yes trees are wonderful!! The old tree in front of your house must be beautiful and for some reason i think they feel too. i remember my parents wouldnt let me break a flower in the evenings, saying they were sleeping. :)<BR/><BR/>Samudraa, you write so well yourself and ffrom what i read you have a fine enough vocabulary. thanks, thought. :)<BR/><BR/>Jon, it seemed to me to be so....:) thanks!gulnazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04303326222747011474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122007128253792582005-07-22T10:08:00.000+05:302005-07-22T10:08:00.000+05:30Night skyBlush-stained and bruisedCarries the moon...Night sky<BR/>Blush-stained and bruised<BR/>Carries the moon.<BR/><BR/>Beautiful :)<BR/><BR/>Ah........how i wish i'd a richer vocab :(Sindhuja Parthasarathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05670086952804264999noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1122005492509472862005-07-22T09:41:00.000+05:302005-07-22T09:41:00.000+05:30I love trees and I love your idea that they can st...I love trees and I love your idea that they can stand guard. There is one right in front of my house and now I will always imagine it is standing guard. You have a way with words.Mridulahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07899575209261241247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121997017720454422005-07-22T07:20:00.000+05:302005-07-22T07:20:00.000+05:30This is beautiful.This is beautiful.. : A : .https://www.blogger.com/profile/04410256917258728976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121996078416072322005-07-22T07:04:00.000+05:302005-07-22T07:04:00.000+05:30How beautiful. I especially liked the blush-stain...How beautiful. I especially liked the blush-stained, bruised sky carrying the moon. So much meaning in so few words.sk8rnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03677064901366208587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121992280483129552005-07-22T06:01:00.000+05:302005-07-22T06:01:00.000+05:30Gulnaaz,I am sorry Gulnaaz for upsetting you. That...Gulnaaz,<BR/>I am sorry Gulnaaz for upsetting you. That was not the intention. The intention was to "KNOW" you. And you did not disappoint me. Thanks again. You will not haer from me, again.<BR/>Bye- Have a good life!<BR/>Anon...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121969951983437192005-07-21T23:49:00.000+05:302005-07-21T23:49:00.000+05:30You have two remarkable images in this great poem....You have two remarkable images in this great poem. The strudy trees display a sense of protection and wisdom, while the night sky seems sore and swollen. It is quite a juxtaposition of feelings. Especially the night sky. Blush stained and bruised linger in my mind long after I read this poem. It sounds painful and responsible. Amazing post!Adrian Neibauerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07141883534073122903noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121968474337612832005-07-21T23:24:00.000+05:302005-07-21T23:24:00.000+05:30http://www.art.unt.edu/ntieva/artcurr/asian/haiku....http://www.art.unt.edu/ntieva/artcurr/asian/haiku.html<BR/><BR/>sorry thougts, the link above is not working, posting it again.gulnazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04303326222747011474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121968350896367332005-07-21T23:22:00.000+05:302005-07-21T23:22:00.000+05:30Transience, yes that is so... :)Pallavi, thanks! ...Transience, yes that is so... :)<BR/><BR/>Pallavi, thanks! believe me, you miss it, even if you have never experienced it. :)<BR/><BR/>Poems and Writings, thank you, I am glad you liked them. I hope you come by again.<BR/><BR/>Avik, aww thanks! ...sure will drop by soon. <BR/><BR/>thoughts, <A HTTP://WWW.ART.UNT.EDU/NTIEVA/ARTCURR/ASIAN/HAIKU.HTML>Haiku</A> <BR/>I am not an expert at it. besides, I am not good at following rules, so you might see a clash between traditional haiku and what i write here.<BR/>about the second line: blush-stained and bruised are the colours of the night sky. the context i have them used in, you have already understood. :)<BR/><BR/>Thinkpad, I am so glad you liked it. thanks for coming by, hope you come again. :)gulnazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04303326222747011474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121967946331278552005-07-21T23:15:00.000+05:302005-07-21T23:15:00.000+05:30wow haikus! and the way u expressed yourself actua...wow haikus! and the way u expressed yourself actually collapsed poetry n prose! i think one can say a lot in very few words, just like in haiku.thinkpad_84https://www.blogger.com/profile/03631738396392106755noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121960488541516632005-07-21T21:11:00.000+05:302005-07-21T21:11:00.000+05:30ok.. first things first .. whats a haiku?and i cud...ok.. first things first .. whats a haiku?<BR/>and i cudn't understand the secondlast line...undertood the context though...thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05979367815198001943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121957203229617712005-07-21T20:16:00.000+05:302005-07-21T20:16:00.000+05:30beautiful poemsbeautiful poemsRenee Wagemanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07822300985311017250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121950765775899842005-07-21T18:29:00.000+05:302005-07-21T18:29:00.000+05:30beautiful haiku by the way :)beautiful haiku by the way :)Pallavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15142772926587548310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121950738134999822005-07-21T18:28:00.000+05:302005-07-21T18:28:00.000+05:30AHhh Togetherness.. its something you never miss w...AHhh Togetherness.. its something you never miss when you are on your own but once you get the taste.... its like an addiction... :)Pallavihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15142772926587548310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121941133810933252005-07-21T15:48:00.000+05:302005-07-21T15:48:00.000+05:30oh my! i love the image of blushing and bruised ni...oh my! i love the image of blushing and bruised night. it's so sensual and tender.{illyria}https://www.blogger.com/profile/11333497030751042143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121939195673961682005-07-21T15:16:00.000+05:302005-07-21T15:16:00.000+05:30Irina, thanks, i am so glad you like them....i lik...Irina, thanks, i am so glad you like them....i like silence amongst many other things, gives me space to clear my thoughts.<BR/><BR/>Jaxe, thank you...you have a fine imagination, sir! :)<BR/><BR/>Dale, thanks...*blushes* :)<BR/><BR/>Missy, battered and bruiesed we carry on loving. :)<BR/><BR/>Sue, am so glad you think like that too! thanks!<BR/><BR/>Mitzee, thanks, seeing you after a long time...glad you enjoyed the picture. <BR/><BR/>Nasra, i like peace. :) your appreciation is very encouraging sweetie! <BR/><BR/>Manjusha, thanks!<BR/><BR/>Minkey Girl, thanks and come by again! :)<BR/><BR/>Stella, i looked at it too. i just love a full moon both when its shiny and silver and when its a day old, slightly yellowish looking grand. :)<BR/><BR/>Deem, thanks! all this moon-talk has made me think of that song from moonstruck's sound-track, when the moon shines like a pizza in the sky its amore....ting-a-ling-ting-a-ling!<BR/><BR/>Lorena, love is sweet. :)<BR/><BR/>Anon: you are really begining to irritate me now! i'm not even going to bother replying to this. just one more thing. get your own blog. do not use my space anymore for this. next time i'm going to delete your comment, if it is in the same vein. thank you so much for spoiling my mood!!! passing thought, read my reply to your earlier comment. end of discussion.<BR/><BR/>Yvaine, then i am glad i wrote it. :)<BR/><BR/>Akruti, aww you are such a sweetheart! i enjoy reading your comments, don't be silent please! :)gulnazhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04303326222747011474noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-11421541.post-1121934264030367452005-07-21T13:54:00.000+05:302005-07-21T13:54:00.000+05:30I am becoming a silent reader here,because i alway...I am becoming a silent reader here,because i always fall short of words to express the beauty of the words here:)Akrutihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05597624382564964021noreply@blogger.com